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Mistakes

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Your opinion on
Things that
Do not impact you in the slightest
Is made even less credible
By the fact that
Third grade grammar seems to have 
Escaped
From your grasp
And your arguments have
Sprung so many leaks
They are practically empty
See how your
Words echo
As you stand
On the crumbling foundations of
Your pointless protestations
And honestly-
Are you really so rushed
So eager
To tear down fragile constructs
Built number by number
And brick by brick
That you make
Spelling mistakes?
We are all shouting into the wind. The good news; the wind will only carry grammatically correct sentences (unless it wants a laugh).

Enjoy. Or not.
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athr10's avatar
I really like this one! It gets the enotion and thw thinking across very well.